Could you critique this poem?

I'm sorry sweetie I'm not trying to hurt your feelings but this is not a poem. It is a short story. I do like your message though. A lot of this battle has already been fought for you. Some where around 1970 society started changing drastically. Although the truth will always be the truth. Men are a lot more physically strong then women. And us women are a lot more gentle then men. All of this is for a very good reason so please don't forget why there are two separate genders in this world. Keep on writing. Only read some books on basic structure of poetry and you will be off and running. I hope I haven't upset you because I would never want to shatter a dream.